Lauren, I liked your simple composition. However, your first figure was difficult to read (mostly just were #1 was along the map). Next time make sure that your images are legible/visible to understand. If it's small, enlarge it but if it comes out too pixelated then find a bigger file/image. I like your approach on looking at the overall building. I wished you had added a little more but a decent assessment with what you had. There was also the fact that since your focus was more on the structure/building, you didn't need to mention any of the artifacts.
Lauren, I liked your simple composition. However, your first figure was difficult to read (mostly just were #1 was along the map). Next time make sure that your images are legible/visible to understand. If it's small, enlarge it but if it comes out too pixelated then find a bigger file/image. I like your approach on looking at the overall building. I wished you had added a little more but a decent assessment with what you had. There was also the fact that since your focus was more on the structure/building, you didn't need to mention any of the artifacts.
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